Hai, chiizu~
Posted On June 15, 2008
I kind of like how this turned out, but looking at it now I may just go ahead and re-draw it.
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I kind of like how this turned out, but looking at it now I may just go ahead and re-draw it.
Wow! It looks pretty cute. You’ve really improved. It’s definately one of your better works so far.
I think It’d look better if it was shoulder-up instead. :3
lol anatomy
don’t, this one actually doesn’t suck.
Make them smile :'(
what anon said. I really need to redraw it.
True artists are never satisfied with their own works.
Personally I think it’s really good… the only thing other than overly-finicky anatomy (no one in anime gets anatomy right; look at clamp) is the cross-hatching blush effect on Primula looks a little too spaced apart (the lines). The effect looks perfect on Kaede but Primula’s looks just a little spread out. Though that could just be me being waaaay to OCD about facial details like I usually am. (I can never get chins right)
This is very cute. The hair, eyes, and hands look very good to me. C: Primula~
I really like this one! :)
Complaints: Kaede’s head is 3 ft. tall, primulas neck is way long, primula looks anorexic, style of hands doesn’t match rest of picture.
yeah, I’ve already redrawn it.