wow man, congrats
if I have to choose a ‘bad’ thing about it, maybe it would be the mole size (kind of big)
but that apart is perfect
Ryoko
Very nice.
Only two criticisms: it looks like she’s levitating above the blanket (towel?) a bit. And the mole is a wee bit too big. It’s like once I noticed it, I couldn’t stop looking.
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The position doesn’t seem natural, because there’s not enough bend at the waist/hips to actual make that position make sense. Also, she’s got a disturbingly ruddy complexion. Her face/head is tilted at an angle, but her hair is positioned as if her head was upright.
Marco
making a psition work si very hard…the ony probelm I can see is that those shiny spts in the knees actually look mre like blisters >_>
This is one of your best yet, for sure. You nailed the shadows on the skin and, contrary to the the others, I think the mole is exactly the right size.
She does look like she’s levitating, though. The towel could use some dents and folds around her hips, and maybe stronger shadows under her knees.
IX
Yeah this is one of your best yet, and I now just realized no comic since august 10th ):
wow man, congrats
if I have to choose a ‘bad’ thing about it, maybe it would be the mole size (kind of big)
but that apart is perfect
Very nice.
Only two criticisms: it looks like she’s levitating above the blanket (towel?) a bit. And the mole is a wee bit too big. It’s like once I noticed it, I couldn’t stop looking.
The position doesn’t seem natural, because there’s not enough bend at the waist/hips to actual make that position make sense. Also, she’s got a disturbingly ruddy complexion. Her face/head is tilted at an angle, but her hair is positioned as if her head was upright.
making a psition work si very hard…the ony probelm I can see is that those shiny spts in the knees actually look mre like blisters >_>
This is one of your best yet, for sure. You nailed the shadows on the skin and, contrary to the the others, I think the mole is exactly the right size.
She does look like she’s levitating, though. The towel could use some dents and folds around her hips, and maybe stronger shadows under her knees.
Yeah this is one of your best yet, and I now just realized no comic since august 10th ):
I’ve been busy.
Oh I know that wah, you are one the GARiest forces on the internet just stating how I miss the comic.