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10 Responses to “Hai, chiizu~”

1. e-imi Says:
   June 15th, 2008 at 02:24:40

   Wow! It looks pretty cute. You’ve really improved. It’s definately one of your better works so far.

   I think It’d look better if it was shoulder-up instead. :3

2. Anonymous Says:
   June 15th, 2008 at 02:40:40

   lol anatomy

3. digitalboy Says:
   June 15th, 2008 at 03:29:29

   don’t, this one actually doesn’t suck.

4. G4tsu.P Says:
   June 15th, 2008 at 08:33:30

   Make them smile :’(

5. wildarmsheero Says:
   June 15th, 2008 at 10:57:09

   what anon said. I really need to redraw it.

6. moonspeaker Says:
   June 15th, 2008 at 22:06:42

   True artists are never satisfied with their own works.

   Personally I think it’s really good… the only thing other than overly-finicky anatomy (no one in anime gets anatomy right; look at clamp) is the cross-hatching blush effect on Primula looks a little too spaced apart (the lines). The effect looks perfect on Kaede but Primula’s looks just a little spread out. Though that could just be me being waaaay to OCD about facial details like I usually am. (I can never get chins right)

7. riceball Says:
   June 15th, 2008 at 23:39:14

   This is very cute. The hair, eyes, and hands look very good to me. C: Primula~

8. Keideki Says:
   June 16th, 2008 at 11:55:10

   I really like this one! :)

9. non Says:
   June 16th, 2008 at 22:26:50

   Complaints: Kaede’s head is 3 ft. tall, primulas neck is way long, primula looks anorexic, style of hands doesn’t match rest of picture.

10. wildarmsheero Says:
    June 16th, 2008 at 22:34:50

    yeah, I’ve already redrawn it.

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