Comments on: Hai, chiizu~

By: wildarmsheero

wildarmsheero — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 02:34:50 +0000

yeah, I’ve already redrawn it.

By: non

non — Tue, 17 Jun 2008 02:26:50 +0000

Complaints: Kaede’s head is 3 ft. tall, primulas neck is way long, primula looks anorexic, style of hands doesn’t match rest of picture.

By: Keideki

Keideki — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 15:55:10 +0000

I really like this one! :)

By: riceball

riceball — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 03:39:14 +0000

This is very cute. The hair, eyes, and hands look very good to me. C: Primula~

By: moonspeaker

moonspeaker — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 02:06:42 +0000

True artists are never satisfied with their own works.

Personally I think it’s really good… the only thing other than overly-finicky anatomy (no one in anime gets anatomy right; look at clamp) is the cross-hatching blush effect on Primula looks a little too spaced apart (the lines). The effect looks perfect on Kaede but Primula’s looks just a little spread out. Though that could just be me being waaaay to OCD about facial details like I usually am. (I can never get chins right)

By: wildarmsheero

wildarmsheero — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 14:57:09 +0000

what anon said. I really need to redraw it.

By: G4tsu.P

G4tsu.P — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 12:33:30 +0000

Make them smile :’(

By: digitalboy

digitalboy — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 07:29:29 +0000

don’t, this one actually doesn’t suck.

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 06:40:40 +0000

lol anatomy

By: e-imi

e-imi — Sun, 15 Jun 2008 06:24:40 +0000

Wow! It looks pretty cute. You’ve really improved. It’s definately one of your better works so far.

I think It’d look better if it was shoulder-up instead. :3