97 wip
June 9th, 2008 at 23:48:44 by wildarmsheeroI kind of like how this one is looking
Overall pretty happy with progress so far. There are probably lots of small problems, but the biggest is Rets’ thumb when he’s holding up his two fingers. I learned later on that thumbs don’t bend like that. I’ve been drawing them like that for a while, so I better fix that in the future. Rets’ expression at the end is also dumb, but he’s delivering a dumb punchline so it’s ok. The humour in this comic isn’t really derived from the main script, anyway.
Shading’s a lot easier to put down when I just go at it with the pencil tool. I should just do that from now on. It’s less smooth than using the pentool, but it’s easier to get what I want and it looks fine at a distance.
Pretty happy with Tina’s outfit. I think I pulled off something that looks moe yet at the same time has an air of realism about it. A lot better than what I did in comic… 95?
Tags: Works In Progess
June 10th, 2008 at 01:09:10
Art looks good! Tina just seems a little “perky”, but that might be my eyes slowly shutting down as nod off to sleep.
June 10th, 2008 at 02:42:33
Nah, I made her plenty perky on purpose
June 10th, 2008 at 06:00:26
Tina’s eyes scares me…
everything else looking good
June 12th, 2008 at 01:14:45
nothing wrong with perky….
It looks excellent overall, though I agree with dood….something about her eyes in the first and last frame doesn’t look right, but I assume that’s because you haven’t added her usual two extra lighting effects and slight gradient blur yet.
tl;dr Excellent, just needs usual finishing touches + perky is fine too.