Comments on: just so you know http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/ Fri, 22 Aug 2008 02:54:35 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.1 By: wildarmsheero http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-30645 wildarmsheero Wed, 20 Feb 2008 02:28:39 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-30645 Yeah, I know I got a long ways to go. Thanks for the crits. Also, in that first pic, in the final comic I cropped out his hands since I knew they were bad. The rest of the mistakes are pretty bad, though. But yeah, long ways to go, etc. Yeah, I know I got a long ways to go. Thanks for the crits.

Also, in that first pic, in the final comic I cropped out his hands since I knew they were bad. The rest of the mistakes are pretty bad, though. But yeah, long ways to go, etc.

]]> By: Abrgomez http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-30639 Abrgomez Wed, 20 Feb 2008 01:52:46 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-30639 >>i think these drawings are maybe kind of ok maybe i dunno I just starting reading your comic (/a/, etc). I kinda like it, but it's still not decent enough to pass most anons quality standards.. I'll be honest. You still have a long way to go. The anatomy is too varied, sometimes you do it kinda right, sometimes you do it as a complete failure. The first shot of Rets is of the later kind: hands are completely wrong, and one arm is longer than the other. His head is not symmetrical. His left shoulder (right from our perspective) is a lot longer than the right one. She looks kinda okay, Its just that her boobs should be slightly higher. Just a bit. The second shot (top right): overall ok, but her jaw is too flat and low angled. Compare it to the shot in the left, she has her jaw more angled. Perspective shouldn't affect her jaw line so much. Her left shoulder looks a bit too round. Aside that it looks fine. Bottom right: I like his look lol. Once again, the jaw line strikes again on her. In your first drawing the jaw line was connecting directly to the base of the ear. Now it's connecting to a point slightly lower than that. Her left shoulder is again a bit too large. There's a huge space between her body and her right arm. And her right arm is too thin. Her left ear shouldn't be able to be seen, and I think her eyes are a bit higher than they were in the first panel. Not an expert here, but those are some of the most obvious flaws I found in this. I pointed them not to be an ass or something, just to let you know what are some of the mistakes you committed in this shots and that you try to improve in your next comics. >>i think these drawings are maybe kind of ok maybe i dunno
I just starting reading your comic (/a/, etc). I kinda like it, but it’s still not decent enough to pass most anons quality standards..
I’ll be honest.
You still have a long way to go. The anatomy is too varied, sometimes you do it kinda right, sometimes you do it as a complete failure. The first shot of Rets is of the later kind: hands are completely wrong, and one arm is longer than the other. His head is not symmetrical. His left shoulder (right from our perspective) is a lot longer than the right one.
She looks kinda okay, Its just that her boobs should be slightly higher. Just a bit.
The second shot (top right): overall ok, but her jaw is too flat and low angled. Compare it to the shot in the left, she has her jaw more angled. Perspective shouldn’t affect her jaw line so much. Her left shoulder looks a bit too round. Aside that it looks fine.

Bottom right: I like his look lol. Once again, the jaw line strikes again on her. In your first drawing the jaw line was connecting directly to the base of the ear. Now it’s connecting to a point slightly lower than that. Her left shoulder is again a bit too large. There’s a huge space between her body and her right arm. And her right arm is too thin. Her left ear shouldn’t be able to be seen, and I think her eyes are a bit higher than they were in the first panel.

Not an expert here, but those are some of the most obvious flaws I found in this. I pointed them not to be an ass or something, just to let you know what are some of the mistakes you committed in this shots and that you try to improve in your next comics.

]]> By: Anonymous http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29289 Anonymous Mon, 11 Feb 2008 02:17:46 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29289 <i>>>I am tonberryking after all. </i> LOL WHAT >>I am tonberryking after all.
LOL WHAT

]]> By: GuardMonkey10 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29232 GuardMonkey10 Sun, 10 Feb 2008 19:40:02 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29232 Meh, disregard the trolls and go check out Ryofuko-chan. Its wrong, its loli, and its pretty funny. Its Romance of the Three Kingdoms related too. Meh, disregard the trolls and go check out Ryofuko-chan. Its wrong, its loli, and its pretty funny. Its Romance of the Three Kingdoms related too.

]]> By: kojioe http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29208 kojioe Sun, 10 Feb 2008 16:49:49 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29208 I wouldn't be surprised if people were pretending to be me either. I am tonberryking after all. Actually, maybe it would be better not to pretend to be me... I wouldn’t be surprised if people were pretending to be me either. I am tonberryking after all. Actually, maybe it would be better not to pretend to be me…

]]> By: Anonymous http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29191 Anonymous Sun, 10 Feb 2008 14:32:51 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29191 <i>>>Why on earth would anyone go around pretending to be a self-glorifying loli chasing pedophile who can’t draw or write?</i> You have no idea. Also, go climb a wall of dicks. <i>>>I’m as emo as Shinji Ikari over here.</i> Now that's a fucking lie. Still, lol /a/, glad to see they haven't learned that impersonating somebody has been always counterproductive. >>Why on earth would anyone go around pretending to be a self-glorifying loli chasing pedophile who can’t draw or write?
You have no idea. Also, go climb a wall of dicks.

>>I’m as emo as Shinji Ikari over here.
Now that’s a fucking lie. Still, lol /a/, glad to see they haven’t learned that impersonating somebody has been always counterproductive.

]]> By: Generic_Mistake http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29165 Generic_Mistake Sun, 10 Feb 2008 08:48:35 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29165 It is I! I am the fake *pulls off mask* PS drawings were not bad It is I!

I am the fake *pulls off mask*

PS drawings were not bad

]]> By: wildarmsheero http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29160 wildarmsheero Sun, 10 Feb 2008 07:56:36 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29160 Also trolling me is pointless since I'll just agree with whatever insults you throw at me. Self-glorifying? HAH! Hardly... I'm as emo as Shinji Ikari over here. Also trolling me is pointless since I’ll just agree with whatever insults you throw at me. Self-glorifying? HAH! Hardly…

I’m as emo as Shinji Ikari over here.

]]> By: wildarmsheero http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29156 wildarmsheero Sun, 10 Feb 2008 07:38:51 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29156 Yeah, I wondered that too. But someone is. Yeah, I wondered that too. But someone is.

]]> By: Becca http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29154 Becca Sun, 10 Feb 2008 07:29:14 +0000 http://blog.mistakesofyouth.com/2008/02/10/just-so-you-know/#comment-29154 Why on earth would anyone go around pretending to be a self-glorifying loli chasing pedophile who can't draw or write? Why on earth would anyone go around pretending to be a self-glorifying loli chasing pedophile who can’t draw or write?

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