just so you know

Why on earth would anyone go around pretending to be a self-glorifying loli chasing pedophile who can’t draw or write?

>>Why on earth would anyone go around pretending to be a self-glorifying loli chasing pedophile who can’t draw or write?
You have no idea. Also, go climb a wall of dicks.

>>I’m as emo as Shinji Ikari over here.
Now that’s a fucking lie. Still, lol /a/, glad to see they haven’t learned that impersonating somebody has been always counterproductive.

Meh, disregard the trolls and go check out Ryofuko-chan. Its wrong, its loli, and its pretty funny. Its Romance of the Three Kingdoms related too.

>>i think these drawings are maybe kind of ok maybe i dunno
I just starting reading your comic (/a/, etc). I kinda like it, but it’s still not decent enough to pass most anons quality standards..
I’ll be honest.
You still have a long way to go. The anatomy is too varied, sometimes you do it kinda right, sometimes you do it as a complete failure. The first shot of Rets is of the later kind: hands are completely wrong, and one arm is longer than the other. His head is not symmetrical. His left shoulder (right from our perspective) is a lot longer than the right one.
She looks kinda okay, Its just that her boobs should be slightly higher. Just a bit.
The second shot (top right): overall ok, but her jaw is too flat and low angled. Compare it to the shot in the left, she has her jaw more angled. Perspective shouldn’t affect her jaw line so much. Her left shoulder looks a bit too round. Aside that it looks fine.

Bottom right: I like his look lol. Once again, the jaw line strikes again on her. In your first drawing the jaw line was connecting directly to the base of the ear. Now it’s connecting to a point slightly lower than that. Her left shoulder is again a bit too large. There’s a huge space between her body and her right arm. And her right arm is too thin. Her left ear shouldn’t be able to be seen, and I think her eyes are a bit higher than they were in the first panel.

Not an expert here, but those are some of the most obvious flaws I found in this. I pointed them not to be an ass or something, just to let you know what are some of the mistakes you committed in this shots and that you try to improve in your next comics.